Things to Consider

1. When simply describing the place there is enough details in my opinion to get a good mental picture. Not sure if there's anything lacking though.

2. I establish myself as credible as I explain that I grew up attending the church so the readers can imply that I spent a lot of time in the sanctuary.

3. I'm not too sure if I particularly move the discussion into a new and unique place, but I feel like I do add my own twists. More than anything, I don't think there are a lot of discussion about asian people/culture and christianity.

4. The audience that the narrative will reach will most likely be young adults who grew up in a christian household and are now forming their own opinions on how they want to live their lives.

5. Values that I assume the readers have is that they grew up thinking in a Christian mindset from birth because of parents but now want to "spread their wings" to form their own opinions.

Character

Full Name: William Choi

Gender: Male

Age and Date of Birth (as your story does not need to have a contemporary

setting): Ages: 6, 15, 19. DOB: January 13th 1999

Birth City: Queens, New york

Parent’s Names: Jenni and Andy Choi

Siblings: Grace Choi

Ethnicity: Asian

Pets: A dog after age 15

Education: 1st grade, 9th grade, and Highschool Graduate.

Favorite Movie: Fast and Furious

Favorite TV Show: Didn't have one until age 18, Peaky Blinders

Favorite Book: Never had a favorite book

Favorite Food: Spaghetti

Favorite Day of the Week: Saturday

Favorite Hobby: started Working out around 15

Favorite Drink: Sprite

Favorite Band: never really listened to one specific band

Favorite Song: Blunt Blowin by Lil Wayne ( didn't know what a blunt was until High school)

Favorite Halloween Costume (if s/he celebrated Halloween): never celebrated, it was "the devil's day"

Religious affiliation: Baptist, but not really anymore

Political affiliation: Somewhere in the middle

Love interest(s): Single as a pringle at all times of life.

Physical Description

Eye Color: Brown

Hair Color and Style: Dark Brown, usually longer.

Height: I don't rememeber how tall I was at 6 but I know I was at least 5'7 around 15 and at 19 5'11.

Weight: same as ^ age 15= 160 age 19= 180

Skin Tone: Yellow/tan/asian

Facial Description (does s/he have a unique nose, forehead, eyes, ears, lips,

ect.?): very squinty eyes

Clothes (what s/he is wearing or usually wears): regualar casual clothing

Other Physical Characteristics (booty, busty, muscular, corpulent, scrawny,

disproportioned, ect.): Wide shoulders

Defining Moments

The one childhood instance—good or bad—that indelibly affects who this

character is now: Can't really come up with anything?

The character’s proudest moment: Making it to State in baseball in junior year of high school

The character’s most embarrassing moment: too many to say.

The character’s career goals of future aspirations/ambitions: Never really knew what i wanted to do, but in middle school and through the beginning of high school wanted to be baseball player

Whom the character would most like to have dinner with (past or present)

and why: Jesus, to see if he was even real.

Three adjectives the character would use to describe him/herself: awkward, open minded, guarded