Annotated Bibs Peer Review

"Student Organizations" and ""Economic Security Programs Help Low-Income 

Children Succeed Over Long-Term, Many Studies Find."

Citation :

Sherman, Arloc, and Tazra Mitchell. "Economic Security Programs Help Low-Income 

Children Succeed Over Long-Term, Many Studies Find." Center on Budget and 

Policies Priorities, CBPP, 17 July 2017. https://www.cbpp.org/research/poverty-and-inequality/economic-security-programs-help-low-income-children-succeed-over. February 1, 2018.

For the first source, I am not too sure that it fits the criteria as in the 5 sources we have to annotate as it was basic information about the community she was researching, but I thought it was a good source to make sure she could quote what the community was saying they were trying to do. The second source was more of the academic sources that are needed. The annotation included the three paragraphs needed and I thought that Clarissa did a really good job of putting the source into conversation with her community in the third paragraph. One thing that could be critiqued in my opinion for the annotation is that I saw a couple run on sentences in the beginning of the first paragraph, but other than everything looked good.

For the citations I would say just make sure to get rid of the "https" in the links.